Peer assessment

my peer assessment

what elements of this sequence did you feel were successful? Give at least 2 elements, and explain why they were successful.

I found the final scene successful the phone being filmed by Amara holding the lighter - large element of suspicion which led me to want to carry on watching.

Were there any aspects of the sequence which you felt were confusing/distracting/missing, etc? Be sure to explain your answers.

The pictures were not clear when they were turned around, I could not see what they were.

List 2 things which you feel would have improved this sequence and explain your opinion.

Make the part showing the pictures longer to make it clearer.